Deal Me In – Week 44 Wrap Up


There are so few unread stories remaining in our DMI 2014 rosters that some of the “surprise” from the luck of the draw is fading. I mean, you know “it’s going to be one of these” and you wonder which one – as opposed to earlier in the year, when – if you’re like me – you’d already forgotten you’d even added some of the stories you drew. Please, someone, make me feel better and tell me I wasn’t the only one that happened to. 🙂

New posts this week:

We saw, appropriately :-), “the return” of Returning Reader, who posted about three stories, Alain Mabanckou’sThe Fugitive Doreen Baingana’s “Passion and Katherine Mansfield’s “The Stranger

Katherine read magician David Copperfield’s story “Snow”

Randall posted about William Faulkner’s “An Odor of Verbena”

I wrote about Edina Doci’s “Bear Dance

Dale drew the five of spades and was led to Ray Bradbury’s “Yes, We’ll Gather at the River”

That’s what the DMI crew read this week. What short stories have you discovered lately? Some of us are already pondering what to put on our short story reading list for 2015 and may be willing to be guided…

“From Brussels South to Ottignies” by Monica Westeren

This week I drew the four of hearts for my Deal Me In Short Story Reading Challenge. I’ve dedicated the hearts suit to women authors this year (though I also have a smattering of them in other suits as well). Where did I discover this story? A couple years ago, I learned from fellow blogger Alex (at The Sleepless Reader) of a collection of short stories set in Brussels. Now, I’ve alighted in many countries of the world in my reading, but I can’t think of anything I’ve read with a Belgian setting, so I decided to buy it and planned to use it as “fodder” in my future DMI projects. This is the third (of nine) I’ve read so far, and I also have Edina Doci’s story, “Bear Dance” waiting to yet be drawn this year. The name of the collection is “The Meantime” and info may be found here:


I had no idea what this story would be about, but I guess I shouldn’t have been surprised (based on the title) that the main character works on a commuter train as a ticket inspector. The story is subtitled “The Story of Lia'” and Lia is a young woman working that dead-end job and harboring unfulfilled dreams of being a linguist and scholar. It opens with the following warning:

“If by living your dream you risk seeing it shatter to pieces, then better to remain frozen. For ignorance is bliss, and so are frozen dreams that live forever.”

Reading through the story, however, I doubt that the author believes this philosophy to be true. More likely is that the “warning” is placed in the story as a potential explanation of how so many people in the world choose the “remain frozen” option. I found the story interesting (and the main character’s current job is an ideal time-killer as she considers her preferred career path of linguistics, for she encounters many passengers of many nationalities speaking many languages in the daily performance of her duties). In an early heart-to-heart talk with her brother, when discussing their father’s discouraging her interest in languages, Lia’s brother says, “Don’t you see through dad? He’s shit scared you’ll make it, while he played it safe.” (See? He chose to “remain frozen” as well)

The majority of the story takes place on a train (see title) and also includes the gimmick of dividing sections of text with times – like a train schedule would be presented. There is also a mystical interlude thrown in near the end which took me by surprise as it felt a little out of place and left me wondering if its inclusion was a late decision by the author. Speaking of the author, I searched for her online, but she appears to have fallen silent for now, with the most recent stuff I found being a whole year ago. I hope she herself hasn’t retreated to the choice of remaining frozen…

What short stories have you read recently? Where in the world have YOUR reading travels not yet taken you?

Below: the action of the story takes place between Brussels and Ottignies (where the red stick pin is in this map). I wanted to know where it was, okay? 🙂